Rose,

THIS IS OUTSTANDING WORK!!!!
Quote - **For those that care
My heart is bleeding onto this bed of ice
For those that care
My life isn't made of sugar and spice

For those that care
I'm holding on with a single thread of light
For those that care
I'm fighting this with all my might**

this part of your poem is just majestic....A complete expression of your struggle to be, but a fantastic voicing of your will and determination to keep going, to not give up.

I love this poem, 5/5 all the way.....GR8 WRK!!!

Awe. . . this type of feeling always
has a way of getting to lots of people.
sad, but keep moving forward.
good job+

Hey this poem is soooo cool. i can say the same. very very good job. excellent!