Just Another Name

by aDORKable x3   Sep 11, 2007


All I am is just another name to you,
I'm a memory of what you went through.
Like a notch in a bedpost, I'm a marker in your life -
Each one is similar, but no two are alike.
Mark a date on your calander; it's another goodbye -
It seems to get easier with each one you try.
You no longer get attached - feelings just aren't for you -
So you continue to break hearts; it's just what you do.
Tears are just scars I can wash away with time -
Yet each one reminds you, you're feeding me such lines.
But you've done it so much, it just comes so easy;
So maybe once I'm gone, you'll actually miss me.
I was so different, not like those dime-a-dozen fakes -
But it was too late for you to realize your mistakes.
Even though each on of us are alike, we're all not the same,
But all I'll ever be to you is Just Another Name.

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Just Another Name
By:Ciao
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LOVE it, I can relate to is so well right now, as I`m sure many others can...a great thing to find in a poem that you read. You never enter a poem that I read and shrug my shoulders and say "meh" , they`re always so unique and they ALWAYS blow me away ! Great job, :]
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Each multiplied by 10 to make it out of 100

Content - 10/10 ; 100%
Spelling & Grammar - 10/10 ; 100%
Appeal - 10/10 ; 100%
Flow - 9.8/10 ; 98%

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Loved it! i can definately relate!

  • 17 years ago

    by Woe

    Loooove it.
    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    You know that I love this one, obviously lol. The imagery and the flow is awesome, as well as the rhymes, at some parts it felt a little forced for flow and rhyme, but there was only like two parts, so other than that, I loved this. Twas gonna place it as well, but the contest was very hard to judge and ended up jsut sticking with the other one.

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Shauna

    Great Poem!!
    Okay.. So I have to tell you that I added you for an author.. You are Talented and I look forward to reading more!

    5.5**
    <33

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "You no longer get attached - feelings just aren't for you -
    So you continue to break hearts; it's just what you do."

    OH HOW I LOVE THOSE LINES!

    This was beautiful...heartfelt and sad, and such emotion and depth within the words, with a beautiful stunning ending to match.