by *Charisma*
Nice job! Some parts sounded a little forced with the rhyme, but the ending was great! Really think it had a good conclusion! |
by Jenni Marie
"You no longer get attached - feelings just aren't for you - |
by Shauna
Great Poem!! |
You know that I love this one, obviously lol. The imagery and the flow is awesome, as well as the rhymes, at some parts it felt a little forced for flow and rhyme, but there was only like two parts, so other than that, I loved this. Twas gonna place it as well, but the contest was very hard to judge and ended up jsut sticking with the other one. |
by Woe
Loooove it. |
by Tabitha
Loved it! i can definately relate! |