I loved this poem, it moved me in a great way. Keep it up. If u want to chat dont hesitate to mail me @ matt_Stowers@hotmail.com. havnt been on this site in a wile...n the first poem i find is this....tis great, thankyou.
Matt

"she rebels against the light" great write, i enjoyed it.

your servant:
david

Great write Mo! ......one of your best....awesome beginning and ending verses.....so full of imagery and metaphors....well done! All the best, Debbie

Great write Mo! ......one of your best....awesome beginning and ending verses.....so full of imagery and metaphors....well done! All the best, Debbie

Wow, this one is what i called excellent!!! 5/5 without a doubt!!!

Wow, this one is what i called excellent!!! 5/5 without a doubt!!!

Great work... well written...
excellent..