I told u my mind ain't working but based on what i've read and comprehend. this poem, it talks plainly about addiction, and purely about drug abuse.. if so, you really have that great imagination and idea coz u have well described a person using such thing. and i like the way you ended the poem coz it's so true...

Oooo i liked this one..it kind of started off like drugs are good but then you kind of turned the good into something that is self destructing. Good flow to this one. Great writes dear sir..keep it up!

And feel satisfied,
soar the high heavens,
have a peace of mind,

My fav part
5/5
slendiferanormus
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