One of the best and most powerful poems I've read in a long tim! this was really amazing!

Wow, wow! Short yet so effective and powerful. You created excellent metaphor and said so much with a few words! Amazing poem, every line is flawless.
Keep writing!

Great , great , great , great , .. GRREAT !

amazing piece this. loved the lines,

"..But to the place
That she called home
There she lays
Deceived and shattered.."

it was short, simple and packed a bloody good punch.. the feelings flowed smoothly. a superb write.

keep it up :D

~Wake~

Poe would love this. You honor him.