Wonderful poem, i love the emotion and the the way you have expressed yourself, keep writing, your poems are great!

Hey, i liked that, at first i thought the rhuyme scheme was alittle out of sync, but then i realised that makes it fit perfectly with the poem... cos i get the sense of alot of misplaced effort and care... Well done.

Nice poem and I think every men kows the feelings you have, when some u have to fall apart with some one u love. Fantastic one!

It's really hard to get over someone you realy love when they have left you. it is a nice poem

That's so sad,and I actually just ended a relationship with the only guy I've ever really cared for as more than a good friend-and he treated me like the guy in your poem

MosT sondfuL poeM, witH fulL oF usefuL expressionS.... 5/5