Wow I really loved this

one by one
they leap off each strand
as if midnight's abstractions
sprouted legs
for a singular purpose

^ That's my favourite part, but the whole thing is amazing!
Sarah

You have a way with words and your style of writing is very unique. A really enjoyed reading this "dreamy" piece.

This is expressed so beautifully, a bit different than most of your other pieces. I like the references and metaphors, but as always, it is the meanings and emotions that shine through and are felt so deeply upon reading your poems. Fantastic title!

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

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This is so unique piece, it has excellent rhythm and you created some special tone in to this one. It is fantastic, you wrote it greatly. Well done!

Wow, this poem is excellently written, with amazing and vivid imagery and great metaphors. I like it from the beginning to the end, and I like the choice of words in it a lot.
Superb atmosphere through the whole poem.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

Cuteee♥
i love it
5/5

Maybe I am just stupid but some of it totally lost me....but the part I understood was good =)