Comments : Not You

  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    AN AMAZING POEM!!
    LOVE IT!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    Aaaaw lovely. Arroz acaso???

    I loved it, very sad. It showed how you are so over it which is good, but you still remember how he hurt you for not being there.

    I liked the repetition of he was not you, it gave strength to the poem.

    Good job! 5/5 =P