by katy Sep 11, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Along time we have been together, |
Girl this poem is really good... not all poems have to rhym.. honestly i think the ones that dont rhym are the best cause when u try to rhymn it.. you over think the emotion and its less powerful.. but this one is really good |
Wow ur poems are all very long i llvoe them |
by Kristina
Wow this poem is simply amazing. i really liked it a lot. it had so much emotion in it. what a great job you did writing it. 5/5 |
by Angie
A powerfully sad message within your words.... One needs to carry on with life, memories are good to have but don't dwell, carry on and live.... |
by Kris
DOUBLE WOW!!! |