by dollwithafrown Sep 11, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The rain, like glitter, it sparkles the ground, |
I love this, reminded me of a child. Everything she has lost hope in is fading, but the rainbow of color is still so bright, aah, love it. |
I really like the image you put in my head at the beginning. I also like how you ended it, with hope, that is what it felt like to me anyway. Thanks so much for entering the contest, you did a good job. |
by Jamica
Very good flow. nice job! |