Very good flow. nice job!

I really like the image you put in my head at the beginning. I also like how you ended it, with hope, that is what it felt like to me anyway. Thanks so much for entering the contest, you did a good job.

I love this, reminded me of a child. Everything she has lost hope in is fading, but the rainbow of color is still so bright, aah, love it.

5.5
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