by Xx soulful poet xX Sep 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
They argue back in forth while their little girl crys |
by cory
Wow great poem it was sad but had very strong wording. i loved it.5/5 |
by ben thompson
Oh my god what a awesome heart felt write. very very sad. i shall keep the person that is written for in my prayers. as far as your writing the word choice and rhyme were outstanding. work on your structure. i wish you all the best ben thompson. p.s keep writing you have an ability and you may become very good. |
Beautiful, really it is, its such a sad poem, so full of pain and sadness. |