Beautiful, really it is, its such a sad poem, so full of pain and sadness.

Oh my god what a awesome heart felt write. very very sad. i shall keep the person that is written for in my prayers. as far as your writing the word choice and rhyme were outstanding. work on your structure. i wish you all the best ben thompson. p.s keep writing you have an ability and you may become very good.

Wow great poem it was sad but had very strong wording. i loved it.5/5

Cory