Nice...tat happend to me w/ my "supposly best friend"

Lov is sad. that must be harsh. the poem hav good flow. ur feeling expaned in this poem. gr8 job:)

Awww, this poem is pretty touching, and im sure alot of people has the same experience. thanks for writing about it. great job! i loved it. 5/5

Wow that was great i esspesially liked the "your view of life.
expands as far as you believe.
the friendship that you created.
you eventually deceived."
part.good job!!!= ) 5/5

Cory

I can tell that you put a lot of emotion whether it angry or remorse into it
5/5 for the passion of your poem
keep it up