I don't think it's crap. I think its really swell. Your really talented

Great a lot of emotions here

Why did i put great ?!?!?! i meant yeah a lot of emotions here it was a bad time

Wow, this is so full of pain and sadness and this is one poem that I relate to way to much =( Been there, am still there and I know that it doesn't feel like but the pain does deminish a little after a while =( Great emotions flowing through this piece and I hope it gets better for you soon ^_^ 5/5
*Rhea*

A lot of emotion short but to the point. you did a good job. hope things work out for you.