Really like your poem, i can relate to it sorta :) good work
dani

Aww this is really good.. your talented

Aww thats so saddd i wish you had someone else by your side that was just like your mother so that you would be a little healded

I know how u feel, almost, an im sure u get tht a lot,
my grandma and I were close and we lost her last month, its gud u hav a ventage system, holding it up is bad, and when u hav real emotion, well u get a gud poem like this one, excellent job

Amazing. something about ur poems i love soo much:)