by Krazy Sep 12, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
September 11, 2007 |
I loved this. The imagery was great and I really enjoyed the overall hidden story in this. An interesting take on a poem to write about, but very well done as well. |
by Mommy And Me
I realy enjoyed this piece. to me it seems very metaphorical and i absolutly love it. made me think of life in ways i have not for a while... lmao!! well anywhos. the only thing i seemed to not like was the fact that there was little puntuation. not all poems need it. but i think this onee needs a little more to septerate certain peices and to make it flow better. |
by OHgreenman
Wooooow!! I really like this piece!! Beautiful message within these well written lines. Great job!! |