by my demons Sep 12, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
This child stares at me with unblinking eyes |
by Oracle
Loved the little twist in the end. btw, you added a "y" at the end of "the" in the last line. it's not important, though. just pointing it out. well, i loved this one as well. seeing what is alive in someone that is dead. we see what we lose in what is already lost. great poem. |