I found it interesting and enjoyable nice job ^.^

I really liked that poem!!! good job!!! :-)

Terrific piece of poetry. Emotion expressed so beautifully .. you're really wearing your heart on your sleave with this. I love how you get your point across in this - i want you, i need you .. but i won't forever.

On the downside of it, you have just a couple of tiny errors in typing ..
I'm not sure if they are supposed to be there, but i thought it ruined the flow a little bit. Not taking anything away from the poem, its wonderful to read.

Very nice work.
[5/5]
~Pete.