Wow,..Kaz,, this was amazing .. u definitely did some work on your flow .. lol..but its an amazing poem..superbly expressed .. and nicely put through.great work

Loved It ! ^^

~Wake~

Brilliant poem

I love it . . . i can relate to it alot GREAT JOB!!!!

This one is good too, but its that rhyming that gets me. but you pulled it off in this poem. your right the one i read first wasnt the best you've written. this one is really beautiful. keep up the good work.

Awl this is cute! its easy to relate to and so creative keep up the good work! 5/5