This poem has such a powerful meaning. it was well written, very good diction was used, and the message embeded in this piece is easy to understand. good job Sam Mayo keep it up =()

This poem was really good. i think you did an amazing job on writing it. it was really good 5/5

~Kristina

Hide what*'*s I think it should be.

But right no that seems easy
I was a little confused with this line.

The second to last stanza was my favorite. Beautifully written.

So knock down all your wallS
and youR fences, all youR binds (what's a bind?)

Good concept. Interesting title. 4.

Again another exellent poem, i enjoy reading this type of poem as i often write about them myself try " The Bodies Rain" and youll see what i mean. I like the way you dont actually mention names or people just a solid images which leaves this poem open to interpretation :D exellent piece :D xxx alex xxx

You did such an amazing job on
this one, i loved the imagery,
it was so strong, and the title
fit this poem perfectly, great
piece. 5/5

nikki

Ok, The title definitly caught my eye. An interesting topic you had chosen for this poem. Control. A big thing which effects people in everyday life and you expressed it so well. I felt as though you feel you've been controlled before because of the way you described it, it seemed to be so real. The poem was amazing definitly such an enjoyable read. Keep up the great work. ~Mel