by Maria Sep 12, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
A man went off to war that day. |
by Insanity
Humm I have to agree with the othe comments amazing poem. However I am still going to point out it could be better the rythem of the peom is amazing exept for a couple lines that you could rewrite to make it better. |
by Kaz
Wow.. first i wud like to ask.. how did u write this.. this is just amazing.. u've just summarized freedom.. in a diffrnt way.. but so beautiful.. n so touching.. |
That is sad, very well written, sends chill down my spine, good job. |