by Mahlah Sep 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Speechless,silence is all i hear from you |
I liked the way you express your feelings in this poem, expressing sadness but without being schmaltzy. Personally, I would break up some of the lines so that the words stand out more and pack more punch. |
by Nula
Great poem...i love ur expressions..its beautiful |