Wow awesome work

Oh deary. Wow. :P
This was flat-out amazing. It was so dark & haunted. Just amazing. The flow was flawless & your word choices were perfect.

"There's a numbness in your arm,
Thoughts racing in your head,
(Suspenseful music,) sadist's charm, <<<--- I love that line. <3
Drown your heart in dread."

^ Simply marvelous, doll. :) Keep writing. 5.5

-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

You turned a terrible song into an amazing poem haha, great work on this

andrew

Nice work. Another work of art. You should be proud of yourself for the great work you and putting out. Keep it up.
Blacksand