That was absolutely beautiful. The flow was so perfect, and the wording was simple yet really effective.
You did a really good job on this.
Love always,
Tara-Kay
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This is very well written. A grat first post. The flow seems so natural and fits very well together.

You have done a wonderful job! I hope that you will continue sharing your poetry with us here.

Welcome to the family here at Poems-And-Quotes. If you have any questions feel free to ask.

--Sher

It's pretty good. The second verse was a bit repetitive of the word you. The second line in the last verse I thought had one I will too many. You rhymed well and got the message across though. I'll give it a four.

Uber cute!!
i love it
comment backk <33

I loved this..dont know who down voted it..I gave it a 5/5..the flow was great..though a bit of they rhyming was forced..but it still didnt stop the flow for me. I loved the warm fuzzy feeling of this poem and that it was a great write..keep it up!

One word...BEAUTIFUL...it reminds me how i feel about my fiance'...i love him soooo much....and writing your feelings is so hard to write...well for me it is...lol. but anyways...i really love this poem...im gonna add it to my favorites!

BabyGurl

Excellent!!
very romantic, the flow suits out right!

keep it up!

Wow this poem if brilliant it really captures the moment welld done 5/5, your punctuation if great and the rhyme and feeling are fabulous
xx

Beautiful...reminds me of the way things used to be...love this poem. great flow and imagery...good work

Wow.
I really, really loved that.
It was amazing.
Great flow, emotion and such.

Keep it up, dear. (:
5/5

This is soooo beautiful!!!!! i absoulutly LOVE it...and i'm putting it into my favorites!!! keep up the wonderful and beautiful work!!!

take care
Jenna

Again reminds me of my boy, i miss him loads right now :( lol anywaaaaays. I think that this poem was kind of unique different from poetry i have read on this site you really put your heart and soul into this piece and it is reflected in your work :D keep it up and ill continue to read :D xxx alex xxx

Another beautiful write from you, lot of emotion in this piece...would love to see more from you, keep up the good work!

andrew