by Sherry Lynn
Many that are unaware of OCD may not understadn the counting process of this poem. However; for those that know about the disorder and live with it daily it is the counting that makes this poem. |
Excellent poem. I don't have OCD but I know a lot about it. I understood this poem fully and I think you did a great job of explaining it. I liked how you counted in the poem as well as the rhyming. The flow was also lovely and the poem was well put together. |
by Marius Laun
Wow. That was strange. It was good though. It flowed really well. The scheme was unique too. I liked it |
by Roxy
Lol!!! There are not many poems on thsi site about OCD I have it myself I have a habbit of randomly standing up in class and closing the door I cant stand it and I have to like check it ifs closed -.- Its quite annoying and sometimes you can be picked on for having OCD but it doesnt bother me really ^^ Great write xxxxx Love you loads mwah xxx Love From Roxy |
by Veamm
Excellent! |
Alright, I take back what I said before about, "If I could be." Nah, jk. But this is EVEN more original than the other one. I don't have OCD but I have heard about it and i feel you have descibe this topic quite well. Keep up the good work. =) |
The counting quite makes this piece, |
Interesting, but again, it didn't do much for me. I didn't <feel> your emotion on how you felt about this. |
by GoodMEMORIES
Oddly i thought that it was kinda funny.. i really enjoyed this piece... it was kinda "just a poem" but you obviously wrote it for a reason |