Can't You See?

by MusoXDanielle   Sep 12, 2007


Why is it so hard to see,
Whats wrong with you,
Is wrong with me,
You once would say you
Loved me,
And i belived you
Foolishly.

You never loved me,
Please just tell me the truth,
Or is it so hard for you
To be honest with me,
You're not the man,
I thought you'd be.

Yeah, i know life's not easy,
But love dont help,
When you get your heart ripped in pieces,
The man i thought,
Was sent from above,
Taught me that,
Love's not worth,
Making life tough!

Now i've moved on,
You wont hurt me no more,
I'm not letting love,
Become such a war,
I've found a man,
Who makes me feel good,
Love's me, just like he should.

No more hurt,
No more Pain,
I wont let love,
Like that happen,
Again!

I had a very bad exp with a guy and this just came into my head!
I hope you enjoy it!

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  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Hey :]
    I like yuur work, Cos yuur not trying to force any "rhyming words" and it just comes out. Some writers spend ages editting their poems, and I don't think poetry is about that, I think it's just about letting what yuu feel come out....

    ;D 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Simply Me

    I really liked this poem and thank you for commenting mine i gave u 5/5 good job