What do you do?

by ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs   Sep 12, 2007


What do you do when smiles go away?, when everything
changes in only one day?

What do u do when someone u love so much,
has already betrayed Ur trust?

What do u do when the butterflies just go away?,
when "i love u" becomes what u USED to say?

what do u do when all u do is cry?
when all hes been telling u is all these stupid lies?

What do u do when hes the only one u think about?,
when u know its love, and u have no doubt?

what do u do when love falls true?, when the on u love doesn't love u?

Plz rate or post comment i really need advice on this poem its the first i ever written..:)much love

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    I love all of your poetry.
    the ones i read anyways.
    :))
    this poem in by far my favorite though.
    I dont know why, it just is.
    dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

    And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
    thanks love!

    -jesss.
    Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)

  • 15 years ago

    by katie

    Has alot of emotions and very good. Keep writing.

  • 15 years ago

    by MzLonely

    This is a great poem. Expresses alot of emotions and I totallyy feel you.
    if you ever need someone to talk to just send me a message. & Keep writing, it helps alot.
    =]

  • 15 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I really like this!!!!! it was AMAZING!!! keep it up and you did a really great job!!! please read some of my poems and give me feedback????

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Has already betrayed Ur trust?
    this line is too short !
    Otherwise , absolutely fantastic . Really heartfelt , an honestly fantastic job . Well done love , 5/5

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