Comments : I can...

  • 17 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Dats sad. i like it though. ur an amazing writer you jusss keep goin and keep folowin them dreams.
    katrinamarie

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    I think a lot of people can really connect with this poem... not exactly saying everyones dad is like that... but to the extent of people's dreams being shot down.

    I like being able to relate to the peom I'm reading.

    nice work:)

    keep it up