Excellent!

i can hear gun shot, i can hear hearts pounding..
i totally feel the thoughts you've written..be proud!

keep it up!

Basic training in ft.leonardwood missouri. thats where david is... im not sure about friends but yeah.... you did really good on this one.... if only everybody would remember those who fight for us...

Omg his poem was rly touching.. i know i dont live in the states but are troops r fighting also, and all troops deserve respect for what they go through but no one shows it

awesome poem loved it