by BlueDreams
Lovely penned sir, within beautiful emotions you write this poem to her, "this can't describe within word, but from your heart...." one of beautiful love poems... Perfect! |
by Wake
A silent wow is what my mouth let out..u knw,,tht cold one tht sends tht chill dwn yir spine..brrrrr .. Awesome piece this .. simply. |
This is excellently penned. It was so fluid from start to finish, with a great musical rhythm. Beautiful vocabulary, and very emotive and heartfelt. I adore this writing. |
by Ingrid
A beautiful poem, but then...everything you write is just that: beautiful! |
by Weeping Wolf
Ohhhh my goshhh Gary, i can't believe i haven't read this one before!!!!! its absolutly amazing! its feel like you just thrusted me into nirvana reading that! love these kinds of poems, beautiful gary, just beautiful. |
Wonderful Gary, Bravo, an Incredible Spill of Love, Magnificent!!! |