Wow, this is very intense and powerful. Greatly written dark poems, with the emotions excellently expressed and very good atmosphere in it. Whole flow of this piece is great. Truly unique poem.
My favorite stanza is:

-Lost to the absence of light
Nothing can ever be right
It bears down on me, with all its might
And I'm losing a part of myself tonight-

The repetition of the second stanza through the poem is very effective.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

Howsume