by CaffeineBomb Sep 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
"The feather enters your mouth..." |
by CaffeineBomb
Edited the feather bits because I wasn't too sure of them myself. |
by nikki
The feather was a little weird but i loved it, it was beautifully written. 5/5 |
I don't know if I like "The feather out your mouth..." at the end, but I loved everything up until then, especially the ending stanza. Again nice job! |