This is a very romantic poem that flowed from pure emotion and passion
It is very sensual and full of imagery

Wow. That was amazing. It was penned so beautifully and had such elegance. The imagery was great. I felt like I could actully see it happening. Although that might sound kind of lame. But you did a great job on this piece..

You get a 5/5 from me...

I thought it was a very nicely written peice, the emotion was good and the flow was great to, the imagery of it was good enough to image the scene playing out before me and it was great, a well deserved

5/5

Well written, i like how much emotion you have in it.. great poem

Alot of emotion is present in this poem.. very good flow.. another great work!

5.5**
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Aw..wow!.. this was really sad.!

im sorry,,

Aly