Walls

by xXxVampxXx   Sep 13, 2007


Faceless worthless damned 4 all time
alone and faithless standing in line
his face in the distance smiling with love
almost hes convinced her 2 share who she is
she swore so long ago she would not divulge
this person on the inside
shes got all her walls
shes hidden so safely no one can break though
the persistence and soft words..
break down resistance
she caving its coming she sharing herself
she so scared of hurting but she allows herself hope
she should have know better!
what a horrendous joke
she gave in and gave all her faith unto u
u said she was special
u said she was strong
u made her believe that she could hold on
it was all lies just another swan song
u left her as soon as u had what u wanted
now hiding alone shes scared she'll break down
she knew it so deeply that it could never be true
and now forever sleeping
her life lost because of a man

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alison

    Again, I like the haunting effect it gives. The idea of walls is really good idea. Nice write =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Those "walls" are the center, and all around. This was well written. Well done. I like this.

  • 17 years ago

    by divine divinity

    That poem has so much depth to it, its really beautiful but at the same time really dark and sad, the walls are just what i have and this poem is like the story of what happens if you let someone in. keep writing, your gifted.

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