That poem has so much depth to it, its really beautiful but at the same time really dark and sad, the walls are just what i have and this poem is like the story of what happens if you let someone in. keep writing, your gifted.

Those "walls" are the center, and all around. This was well written. Well done. I like this.

Again, I like the haunting effect it gives. The idea of walls is really good idea. Nice write =]