My mind

Certainly different. a ghastly image in a almost pure place of joy. darkness entering into the undying love that nature is. it was quite powerful, my friend. keep up the great work.

Its verry good keep it up makes u want to think bout y was the dog beaten or y was it killed y in that feild etc good job

It reminds me of this book I was basically forced to read. It is also about a dog but it definitely held a lot more meaning than that. There this contrast in the imagery which works well for this as it can be taken to a deeper meaning that I'm not going to dig for. Though short it is quite powerful.
~Faith-less

Thank you alot.. it means alot to me that someone can see it.

Very unique and effective, truly powerful. You said so much with so little words, this little piece has great hidden meaning, whole metaphor is superb.
Keep up!