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  • 20 years ago

    by XJulesX

    Great poem. I liked the subject. I feel for ya girl.

  • 20 years ago

    by Sonya

    Wow, that was great. I can definedly relate in so many ways! I really like this one! Still hope to see more!

  • 20 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    I re-edited this poem, so I hope you'll like this version better. Thanks for the comments guys, they mean a lot!

  • 20 years ago

    by Danielle

    This is really cool...i like how you worded things in that one...gud job

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    aww robyn...you poor doll..im sure things will be okay, just believe <33 you have amazing talent and you can go so far in life, just try, there are people who care and will be there for you...and times will seem there is no one, i know, but there are sooo many...i promise you <33
    -Mortalidaga