by Shauna Sep 13, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Stars soar over the ocean, |
Damn nice! |
WOW!!!! I LOVE IT!!! so beautifully written! Glorious imagery! read it three times! LOVED the lines: |
by Dan Doyle
Wow. I started to read it, and found it was a little lengthy. However, I HAD to read on! It captivated me! I love it! |
by Gabrielle
Your description of the setting really makes the poem interesting and makes you mentally visualize what you are writing! Great job! and by the way thank you for commenting me on my poem. I cant wait to see what other poems you have =) |
Wonderful poem , twisted a little , but well written and choice of words , was simply great , your talent is excellent , I loved this one , it was great , and a pleasure to read, keep it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5 |