by Somber Esprit Sep 13, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Birthday cake, ten candles burn |
This was a beautiful write. The story is sad and heart wrenching, the only thing I can say is the flow was a bit off for me, it flowed very smooth in some places, I especially like the touching end. You did a nice job. Thanks for entering the contest. |
by Veamm
Excellent!! |