by Somber Esprit Sep 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Lay me down, upon the bed, |
by Claire Bear
Truly excellent poem , Love the feeling of eroticism and the desire expressed within it, |
by debbylyn
Love the flow and feel of this one....just the right touch of eroticism...the last two lines are perfect! All the best, Debbie |
by Shauna
Beautiful!! Lovely writing Hun.. Keep it up!! |
by Kaz
WOW... gr8 beautfiull.. poem with so many feelings.. gr8 wrk... ur feelings r truly expressed.. all frm heart.. the way u express ur desire.. soo unique.. very well written |
by Gem
An amazing piece, it portrays a side of love that many people are afraid to write about or embarrased to. |