Very powerful with greatly created dark atmosphere. I like the rhymes in the whole piece.
My favorite stanza is:

-The Tears of Heaven
Pour down on the land
The ground is leaven,
Forests turn to sand...-

Keep up!

Some interesting imagery. It does start strong but I'm thinking that the mention of the car is not very effective as it was simply mentioned and nothing else was done with it. Otherwise if flowed rather well and the words were effective in displaying the imagery. In a way it just seemed the last stanza was a bit forced to rhyme.
~Faith-less

Wow! This is a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. I think you did a wonderful job on it. Keep on writing! 5/5

~Kristina