Gr8 poem

You have a unique way of saying so much with so few words. Your vocab and word usage here were really wonderful. Great write.

marcella

You have a great way on picking your words in a different way, i really like that. you just make the words flow so good...I REALLY like this poem A LOT too.

BabyGurl

Another great poem on an interesting tyheme as old as mankind ,,,great poems

Wow! Brilliant poem you have written here. I can definitely relate to this and I'm sure a lot of other people as well can. You did a really great job writing this! The flow was perfect! Keep on writing! 5/5

~Kristina