Excellent!

i enjoyed reading it, it rhymes so well, honestly i forgot how to criticize, the words usage were so great! truly talented!

keep it up!

This poem is more of a deep thinking poem than those that take you for an emotional ride. I loved the message, the flow was great, and it rhymed effortlessly; but, I lacked being drawn into it. None-the-less, it is flawless on any other standpoint. This was an awesome write.

Take care!

~Richhieeee

Wonderful poem. I love it.

Wonderful Poem!

5.5**
<3

Oh,I love your life poems...they are so insprational and questioning
You really reflected life on this

I especially liked;

At the times your life seems so absurd
You foolishly turn from the truest word
That could place you on the wings of a bird
So that you may hear what others have heard

Good job,
Laura