This was interesting...not my kinda writing but it was good...i liked it. Keep it up! thanks for commenting on my poems...

BabyGurl

Yet again.. so much meaning put into so few words. It's awesome. To me this speaks of a new life being created (which is kind of obvious) but about how we're all the same, no matter what we look like or where we come from. Awesome piece. 5/5 from me for sure.

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

It was so truthful and real
But please capitalize the beginning letters,it would look perfect this way

My fave lines are;

solidity in structure
flows down with clarity
Connected in blood
not made in any country

Keep it up,
Laura

Very interesting poem. I usualy don't read this type of poem, but yours was well written and conveyed your meaning. I think I understand it. lol Good job. 4.5
Ciao

This is a very deep view of life and you are a skilled poet Ienjoy reading your poems