by Veamm Sep 13, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Deep waves |
Very deep poem written in form |
by Miu
Ahh i love how the poem really is deeper then it look in first place. Very nice use of words. Though I coulnd feel the emotions so much, but the imagenary was so pretty. |
by Cella Bella
Again, I think you have some extra commas in there. In it's entirety, it's a very captivating little piece of poetry. |
by Raychil
I really liked this poem. I liked the hidden message in your words. It was very deep without having to say exacly what it meant. I really liked it. |
by Jenna
Very Well Written...had a nice, sound to it...Keep it up! |