Very deep and well written

Very Well Written...had a nice, sound to it...Keep it up!

BabyGurl

I really liked this poem. I liked the hidden message in your words. It was very deep without having to say exacly what it meant. I really liked it.
<3Raych

thansk for commenting on my poem =)

Again, I think you have some extra commas in there. In it's entirety, it's a very captivating little piece of poetry.

marcella

Ahh i love how the poem really is deeper then it look in first place. Very nice use of words. Though I coulnd feel the emotions so much, but the imagenary was so pretty.
Keep writing 5/5!

Very deep poem written in form