A wonderful memory of someone you loved, well written and from the heart , that makes if even more special, sorry for the lost. Thats something we all have to learn to live with, that no one is promised tomorrow only today , so learn to live, love and enjoy every second like it was the last,,, great job ,,,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Wow.. kaz .. wt u've done here is remarkable.. pretend writing isnt an easy joob n it seems you've mastered the ink in this one.. you really make it feel.. bloody good one mate ^^

keep it up

~Wake~

Whoa that was pretty deep.

I rele lik this, my bf commited suicide last week, and i have to say that the power of this poem is enough to make anyone have tears of joy. depression hurts, u gotta make the best of a bad situation. in a wierd way, thanks a lot :)

Wow!! That brought tears!! I'm very sorry for your loss. I love how you can just write from you rheart like that...you have a real talent!=)