Losing Light

by Twisted Heart   Sep 13, 2007


Upon my heart a glimmer light
fades to a shade of gray
Inside my soul a slumber comes
to still the break of day.

Against the yearning of my heart
I stand beneath the moon
To send a wish up to the stars
that you will come back soon.

Inside are broken promises
a shatter to the mind
As distant shadows creep inside
the corpse you left behind.

An empty shell of what I had
now haunts my memory
Among the shimmer of regret
that stays my sanity.

A darkened mist now cloaks the moon
the stars once shone so bright
Has left the heart an opened wound
that's slowly losing light.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is so sad and haunting-and so excellently written with great images and metaphors, but it is the way you've worded it and the meaning and the emotion that really make this piece stand out so powerfully.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Well sad penned, writing within beautiful expressed emotions...to lost someone would be great painful... Beautiful done!